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Author Name: Freexthinkwhtuwantx 1 Comments
Date Added: April 25, 2009 23:04:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
no one there
and there's no response.
no response at all.
and there's no one there.
no one there
to watch her fall.
for she's been stumbling for awhile.
waiting for something.
for someone.
to make her smile.
and there's no room to breathe
no room to live
and there's nothing left
nothing left to give
for she's been empty for some time
sulking in the steepest loneliness
the hardest mountain to climb
and there's no voice
not a single sound
and there's no one there
no one there
to watch her body hit the ground
there's no one there
no one there to love.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on June 19, 2009 08:48:00 PM Report
very sad and powerful piece,Brittany
there's always some one there,if you just take the time to look

Micky





 


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