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Author Name: Freela-la908 3 Comments
Date Added: April 08, 2009 02:04:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Until I Collapse
UNTIL THE SKY CAN'T TOUCH THE OCEAN
AND MY EYES CAN'T BEHOLD ITS RARE BEAUTY
YOU WILL NEVER MAKE ME CRY AGAIN
YOU WILL NEVER SEE ME FALL BY YOUR HAND
 
AND UNTIL THE BEAT OF MY HEART RESTS
EVEN FOR A SECOND,
I WILL NEVER ASK WHY I AM STILL ALIVE AGAIN
YOU CAN NEVER MAKE ME FALL
 
UNTIL THE WIND AND RAIN CEASE TO ARRIVE
AND WE LIVE AMONGST OUR TRUELY ROTTING SELVES
FROM THE STENCH OF DEAD ASPIRATIONS,
YOU WILL NEVER AGAIN MAKE ME FALL
 
UNTIL MY HANDS ARE TAKEN AWAY FROM ME
THEN UNTIL MY THOUGHTS BECOME ONE,
YOU CAN NEVER MAKE ME FALL
THE ESSENCE OF MAHALA WILL STILL BE HERE
 
AND FOR ALL THE TIME YOU DON'T OPEN YOUR EYES
AND REALLY UNDERSTAND BEAUTY
I WRITE THIS SEEKING NO APOLOGY,
 
UNTIL I COLLAPSE
AND MY ALL THOSE TEARS RISE UP TO ABOVE
AND ALL THOSE SIGHS JOIN THE BREEZE
YOU WILL NEVER MAKE ME LOSE MY STRENGTH,
BECAUSE I WILL NEVER LET YOU BEAT ME AGAIN!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on April 8, 2009 10:24:49 PM Report
Very moving and so full of your amazing strength thorugh words.. I am in  awe.. Deeply and truly in awe..

 

 

Hugs,

Moonie..

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 8, 2009 12:21:30 PM Report
So emotional every word of abuse.. I just don;t know what to say...?
 Keep your spirit that no-one will break...You will survive
 Hugs and love ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeEllis Beck on April 8, 2009 06:36:23 AM Report
This is beautiful and rings very true for me. A great well articulated and moving poem.

 

E.B





 


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