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Author Name: Freeborderline_mary 1 Comments
Date Added: April 04, 2009 15:04:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Seven Years
Seven years ago
I walked the desert before you,
Where my chapped hands cupped precious little water,
And I could never weep
For fear I might run dry and wither.

I walked the sands in velvet and silence,
Leaving neither track nor trail,
A Ghost under the pulsing moon,
Cast in silver and ice‭;
I was a thief without beauty,
A traveler without road,
Sleeping away all light
And walking the dark paths that no one had marked.

Where were you then‭―
Or were you anywhere‭?
Were you a spirit to my ghost,
A soul to my shade,
An empty place for me to fill with the warmth
I could never find alone‭?

You came to me in the storm
At the point of a sword‭―
Reaching for me‭―
The sands shifted under us,
And you flowed softly over my dry tongue,
And cupped your hands for me to drink‭;

And the Ghost walked with you no more
Under the moon,
For I was with you instead.
Author's Notes:
A personal and whimsical metaphor, for which I have a friend to thank.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on February 28, 2010 05:24:55 AM Report
Though this is not to the style of my personal liking I find it a strangely attractive piece and had to read it several times, its very descriptive and holds a haunting quality that is almost one could say meloncholy,wonderful writing~Graham.




 


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