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Author Name: Freesheedreams 9 Comments
Date Added: January 26, 2011 23:01:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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What Ever!
 
 
Someday will come when you will cease
You tried to live at ease with peace
And leave a mark, furrow or crease
                what ever
 
Your triumphs and failures will not mean much
Beauty, money, brilliants, color, and such
And no more loved ones to hold or touch
                what ever
 
All your yearning will flee far away
But what you taught may be here to stay
Perhaps even help someone someday
                what ever
 
No more surprises, smiles, or cheer
Resentments, grudges, pain or fear
You will be gone, no longer here
                whatever
 
It's not what you got, but what you gave
Or what you brought or what you save
When you enter that final unsung wave
                 what ever
 
Ambitions, hope, health, and desire
Wins and losses, elation and dire
Will fade away and then expire
                 what ever
 
It will not matter what you do
Or what you did to make it through
Only the memories of those who knew you
                what ever
 
We cannot see what's in the vast unknown
Just words from a book, we call our own
Tells us we reap what we have sown
               whatever
 
Just be your best while you are here
Those ominous clouds will soon disappear
And you will be forever dear
                whatever!
Author's Notes:
a co-write with my brother
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichelle on May 26, 2011 09:06:39 AM Report
Luv! It's going n my favs! <3 <3 <3
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on January 27, 2011 09:45:53 AM Report
How all very true....whatever.

Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on January 27, 2011 07:09:52 AM Report
ha ha What ever is such a .....what ever word, love the poem

Comment By: FreeRobert on January 27, 2011 06:03:32 AM Report
This is great L.J.  A universal theme! Seems there is more than one talented poet in the family. Well done to both of you!
Comment By: Freejamieson steele on January 27, 2011 01:58:02 AM Report


Linda Jo,


   Sounds like Doris day


or my son hitting the tree backing out!




Jamieson

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on January 27, 2011 12:17:20 AM Report
Oh I so liked this!! Your repeating of the word 'Whatever' made me remember so many ways I used that same word and the meaning behind it.. Lovely piece full of great insites. Way to go my hip hugger sita!



Huggies;

Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeJohn Bates on January 26, 2011 11:38:37 PM Report
I love this.... reading this, I can hear my daughter with her rather haughty attitude:  "Whatever!"  This is really good, and you and your brother are a bit of alright....
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on April 4, 2009 10:45:27 AM Report
Lovely Co-write.

You are so gifted and it must run in the family!
Your Friend ......Fletch

 

Comment By: FreeJulie on April 2, 2009 04:27:50 PM Report

Whatever...Oh such a lovely poem.  And what a special thing to co-write something so meaningful with your brother.   I enjoyed the insight immensely.  Great job. 






 


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