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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 11 Comments
Date Added: March 23, 2009 20:03:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Wind Cries

 

The lonely wind cries as it moves past me
 
I walked quickly along the river of sadness
 
All the time pretending there was no pain
 
Memories push me forward as I think back
 
Another night slowly closes in around me
 

I loved you once but I will not love you again

 

 

 

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Comment By: Freejohn carter on May 7, 2009 08:14:36 PM Report
Sadness is found in many writes. And i feel on this occasion that if i could only put my arm around you and tell you that pigs fly better backwards.

                                                                           Your friend

                                                                               John

Comment By: FreeJennifer on April 7, 2009 02:37:10 PM Report
despair I feel like all walls were closing in on me! Good use of so little words to have such a HUGE impact! You been on a writing kick haven't ya there? I gotta go play catch up! Check ya later

jen

Comment By: FreeAngel on March 31, 2009 01:11:49 PM Report
Excellent Steve

 

Love Angelxxx

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 27, 2009 07:40:48 PM Report
Stark emotional imagery, Shady..I could picture the scene and feel the sorrow....len
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 25, 2009 05:16:28 PM Report
This poem is a fine example of dejection and strength well presented. Good work Steve!

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 24, 2009 08:02:54 PM Report
Steve,
Great write and I also the finality of love.
Well done--
Hugs,
~Tracie

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on March 24, 2009 07:12:47 PM Report
Steve, great writing here,. thoroughly enjoyed this,. john
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 24, 2009 09:27:31 AM Report

Steve ,
 The cutting pain of heartaches become
such a sharp sword of truth..
 I know how you feel .
Never to love that deeply again
Hugs ~ She Whispers

I loved you once but I will not love you again


 


Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on March 24, 2009 08:47:59 AM Report
Hi Steve
There is a certain finality about this...the stark final line is self explanatory. short but poignant
Ali x

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on March 24, 2009 01:11:37 AM Report
Steve this was beautiful! I agree with Linda. It was haunting and so true to itself, that it held deep meaning..

 

Great piece...

 

Hugs,

Moonie 

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on March 23, 2009 11:19:29 PM Report
this is hauntingly real and convincing. It reminds me of one of my favorites taken from  ancient Japanese poetry..."Where is the dark seed that grows the forget-you plant?  Searching, now i see it grows in the frozen heart of one who has murdered love."  (author unknown)

thanks for sharing. shee





 


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