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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 12 Comments
Date Added: March 16, 2009 20:03:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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As Darkness Falls

  

That look slowly gives you away
 
Emotions coiled ready to strike
 
I feel the venom enter my veins
 
Tears of rage flow as you tell me lies
 
No way to escape the coming night
 

Darkness falls and sets my soul on fire 

 

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Comment By: Freejohn carter on May 7, 2009 10:11:07 PM Report
I find the night so angry

Maybe whiplash from your tongue.

 

                                                   John

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comment By: FreeJennifer on April 7, 2009 06:18:29 PM Report
Love hurts.. yet we do it anyway.

Loven this poem

Jen

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 2, 2009 10:44:08 PM Report
Betrayal brings out the worst in anybody. Knowing you are being lied to makes a person pretty upset alright--you've captured the feeling nicely in this poem.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeAngel on March 31, 2009 01:13:59 PM Report
Love can hurt so bad Steve

 

Wonderful

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAmy on March 24, 2009 09:45:40 PM Report
I like short poems that say alot with just a few lines. This one grabs the reader from the get-go.

Good job

hugs

~Amy

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on March 18, 2009 04:48:57 AM Report
Wow Steve! This was deep.. The imagery fantastic... Felt that venom all the way down to my toes...

 

Great write here!

 

 

Hugs,

Moonie

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 17, 2009 12:08:27 PM Report
Such sadness in this.. Love just hurts sometimes no matter what you do??
 I think we all have been there..
Hugs ~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on March 17, 2009 09:15:15 AM Report
O'oo hoo, so right Steve we sometimes forget about the more negative side of being in love, then it's all down to survival.. Nice piece..
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 16, 2009 10:19:16 PM Report

This is a side of you we don't see often. I like this Steve, very nicely done here, Joe


Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on March 16, 2009 09:02:08 PM Report
is somebody crabby today?  dont mean to make light of any situation..."tears of rage flow as you tell me those lies"  why is it that lies are the hardest of words to take?   this one really makes us think...and wish the sun could stay up a little while longer...to delay the moment of confrontation. Let's hope the light of dawn brings something better. sheedreams
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 16, 2009 08:53:32 PM Report
Steve,
Yeegads! Bringing all types of emotion out, I like the light side =o)
Strong write, good stuff!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 16, 2009 08:41:36 PM Report
Sounds to me like the honeymoon is over, buddy.. :o)...Powerful imagery here, Shady... I really like this...len




 


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