| Comment By: Angel on April 1, 2009 06:41:45 AM
Eternally one will wait for the one they love. Another beautiful write Henry.
| Comment By: Wide Awake on March 20, 2009 11:50:50 AM
This poem speaks of a deep and enduring love...a real treasure....both the feelings and the poem. :o)
Beautifully scribed, esteemed fellow poet.
| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on March 18, 2009 05:44:10 PM
|Howdy, Henry!!! One thing I found out about true love from experience....It hits you upside the head when you're not looking.. I trooled a lot of bars in my time looking for it. I wondere why I never found it there???...len|
| Comment By: Joe McNinney on March 18, 2009 07:46:44 AM
|You can tell bloodtear that I was in your mind when you wrote this! LOL! Seriously, this is terrific Henry. Joe|
| Comment By: Cindy Bendel on March 17, 2009 10:37:05 PM
There are some loves in life that have the power to span time and space. Magical and eternal love like this is understood and always cherished. Such a beautiful message of heart Henry.
Yes, another one goes to my faves.
Love will be ever present
if that love is true
Precisely why forever
I will wait for you
| Comment By: bloodtear on March 17, 2009 10:24:49 AM
this was heaps cool
(im not sure if this is what you had in mind when you wrote this)
but when you seperate it up and look at each of the two lines, they have a great meaning in themself, almost like a short quotation
but then the way you put them together flowed so well from one to the next
great read =)
| Comment By: nicholas on March 16, 2009 01:39:51 PM
that is so true good poem
| Comment By: Glata on March 16, 2009 12:41:32 PM
This is the kind of love that everyone craves, but few find. That you've found it speaks of the patience you've exercised to this point...and the dedication to that special someone that you've shown...spectacular!
This is a beautiful write, Henry...showing your heart in a lovely way...She's very blessed!