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Author Name: Freelady in hell 1 Comments
Date Added: March 06, 2009 12:03:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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****Numb UP****
It keeps repeating itself!!
The movie we had made
Together we are the star
And our friends the co stars
 
I kept seeing it
Our hands held together
Our skin tounching
Our lips kissing
I kept hearing it!!!
Your voice oh so velvety
The whisper of  your emotions
The sigh of sweet nothings
It kept going and going
My mind has gone mad
Which way am I to go?
I am lost upon my will
 
Tears flow down my eyes
Tearing me slowly apart
I have lost my life
And yet I feel the pain
 
I kept crying..
Pounding on the walls of my room
Ripping every part of you left behind
and burning my heart to death
 
Can someone ice me up?
I just want to be numb
To feel nothing of this agony....
To creep out of this darkness..
 
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Comment By: FreeSavannah Ollar Jordan on March 7, 2009 11:29:17 AM Report
This poem is like a fiery dart piercing one's heart.  You made me feel the pain.  Good write.




 


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