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Author Name: Freesheedreams 10 Comments
Date Added: February 28, 2009 00:02:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My Bright Little Star
Who are you my bright little star?
Don't you have more to do than chase the moon
             like a puppy after a car?
You tend to wander, tho it's not very far,
Keeping your eyes on him...like he was
             your powerful ruling czar.
Come away with me my little star,
Or must i be happy to capture your twinkle
             and carry it home in a jar?
 
Reply:
I am your bright big star
Even though i live afar
I would love to go away with you
So a jar i am sending you.
 
If you put your twinkle in a jar for me,
And send it into the sky so i can see,
Tho i am far away in more ways than three,
I'll notice its brilliance as it whispers, "shee".
Then i will make a wish for things to be,
And send my twinkle on its way home to thee.
Author's Notes:
just watching the star (which was actually Venus) follow the full moon through
the sky inspired this simple poem.  i was surprised to receive a reply, which
inspired the rest of the poem...and this is how it evolved.  10.13.08
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on September 7, 2010 08:58:57 PM Report
Words and imagery woven together in a celestial way.   
Comment By: Freejakemcqueen on March 7, 2010 10:59:45 PM Report
Read your creation, and yes I can certainly relate. I'm a true Mickey Mouse fan, "When You Wish Upon a Star! You know the rest, don't you?

 

                                                                                                   Dr. Jay

Comment By: FreeHanane on July 25, 2009 06:34:21 PM Report
Hey Linda, what a wondeful poem. a dialougue between moon and stars and you. I like it. So emotional. You are a real artist.

 

Congrats

Han

Comment By: FreeMichelle on June 25, 2009 02:10:31 AM Report
Another so good I have to put it in my faves! Keep up the good work! Stay awesome!
Comment By: FreeAmy on April 15, 2009 10:47:31 PM Report
You write with a little bit of whimsy and it makes for a very enjoyable read. :o)

~Amy

Comment By: FreeJennifer on April 6, 2009 09:33:07 PM Report
I absolutly adore this! So cute! Your poetry makes me SMILE!
Jenny

Comment By: FreeSteven on March 16, 2009 08:20:00 AM Report
This poem was so beautiful! Excellent work here, Linda Jo.

=]

Comment By: FreeStar on March 9, 2009 06:42:32 PM Report
"If you put your twinkle in a jar for me,

And send it into the sky so i can see,"

 

What a lovely idea. I love this write Linda Jo...

 

Stari*

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 28, 2009 03:18:48 PM Report
Shee
So glad I read this it is strange isn't it... A soul sister that is for sure...|We are so connected..
Tell 'Me.....When is your birthday??
She Whispers

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 28, 2009 12:55:30 AM Report
Are you cheating on me sister?? *lol* If it were twinkies in a jar -- then MAYBE!! (mmm, tasty) Cute stuff Linda -- I'm sure you'll cause the heavens to be congested with a whole lot of jars. =))

 

~Barbara~ *with her head in the clouds MOST of the time*





 


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