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Author Name: Freesybilvane 10 Comments
Date Added: February 14, 2009 18:02:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Deceptive Appearances

My path is lined with perfect strangers

Who speak in tongues so kind and deep;

That you love me through their eyelids

Doesn't mean your love's asleep

 

Your path is lined with silken dresses

Of many a goddess in distress;

That I love you with my clothes on

Doesn't mean I love you less

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Comments:
Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on September 17, 2009 06:31:37 PM Report
Beautifully penned Heike. What more can I say? I truly enjoyed reading this awesome poem...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeFilthy on June 23, 2009 05:17:03 PM Report
Sometimes i read poems by writers who can "wow" the world, and i think...is that it! I'm pleased to say it's never happened when i come to your page. Another top class write Heike.
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on May 13, 2009 09:46:44 AM Report
Happy Birthday, sweet young thing! ML
Comment By: FreeJulie on April 23, 2009 06:34:15 PM Report

This was simply an excellent little poem.  The last two lines are perfect.  I loved it. 


Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on April 11, 2009 11:40:32 PM Report
This makes me smile, Heike. Thank you for that. ML
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on February 26, 2009 12:16:02 PM Report
Wonderful Content ~ Wonderful Flow!
Fletch

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on February 21, 2009 11:28:07 AM Report

A change of style for you but one done with aplomb and skill. I did love the sentiments too
Ali x

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on February 19, 2009 05:51:50 AM Report
I too love that last line. This should be given to every girl going out on Prom Night! LOL! Terrific piece Heike, Joe
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 14, 2009 10:36:27 PM Report
Your unique thoughts and presentation makes your work a pleasure to read. Good job Heike!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 14, 2009 06:06:59 PM Report
LOve that last line, kid!...Great!!...len




 


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