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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 13 Comments
Date Added: February 04, 2009 13:02:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Words Not Said

Sitting alone by gentle water as reflections drift slowly by

Vague images come into focus and stir denied emotions

Your face seems to appear and I unconsciously reach out

Such a fool’s mission is my reality and I cry for your presence

Fleeting as it surely will be time enough to say I do love you so

Fear of unrequited love gripped me and became my mistress

I lacked the courage to speak the words which haunt me now

Trembling hands have reached up and wiped away to many tears

 

 

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Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on August 28, 2009 01:04:19 AM Report
The first line delivers such an amazing image to set the stage for the rest of the work. Reflections grow and change in the water, just the way the words we don't say grow and change in our minds. Anything we wish we could say just gets revised and revised like a poem we just can't let go of.

 

Love it, Steve :)

 

~Shanna

Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on August 28, 2009 01:03:33 AM Report
The first line delivers such an amazing image to set the stage for the rest of the work. Reflections grow and change in the water, just the way the words we don't say grow and change in our minds. Anything we wish we could say just gets revised and revised like a poem we just can't let go of.

 

Love it, Steve :)

 

~Shanna

Comment By: FreeAngel on March 31, 2009 01:47:37 PM Report
Another beautiful write. Very deep and touching

 

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeButterfly on March 9, 2009 03:42:28 PM Report
This is beautiful Steve, a lovely and touching poem.

Hugs,

Butterfly

Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on March 1, 2009 04:55:22 PM Report
Brilliant love poem Steve... Good work.. Ther are very difficult to write honestly.. This one has great authority..
Comment By: FreeMary on February 9, 2009 11:35:08 AM Report
awww i kno the pain
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on February 5, 2009 07:44:41 PM Report
The wanting and longing is evident here Steve. A very emotional piece. Very nicely done, Joe
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on February 5, 2009 08:49:41 AM Report
Steve,
Lovely sadness.
Good-good write.
Hugs,
~Tracie

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on February 5, 2009 05:32:15 AM Report
Steve,another great write, john  
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 4, 2009 11:01:15 PM Report
Your words speak volumes -- there is longing and missed opportunity woven into this poem. You write so convincingly but you usually are only being creative and not writing from experience. I won't leave an opinion on this touching poem as I feel foolish when I receive a reply from the author saying, "it's just a write, not real at all". Furthermore -- you're a wise man and anything I could think of you have already thought of a long time before me. Fine penning Steve.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 4, 2009 09:29:09 PM Report
I want a dream lover so I don't have to dream alone. You apint a oicture of pining away very well... The effort put into pining away doesn't hace a very high yeild rate... len
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 4, 2009 02:03:02 PM Report
 Steve,
My heart reaches out ...but wipes the tears away ...
I know of such love I will never whisper how much I love him..
We all have fears when it comes to love...
You always seem to be peeking inside my heart..
 I am just a mortal woman with my own weakness
 Always ~ She Whispers


Fear of unrequited love gripped me and became my mistress

I lacked the courage to speak the words which haunt me now


Trembling hands have reached up and wiped away to many tears


 


Comment By: FreeMoonStar on February 4, 2009 02:01:37 PM Report
This was so beautiful.. Your words touched me so.. Your write filled with such passion that all sat within me and I felt your pain...

 

Wonderfully done my friend...

 

Moonie





 


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