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Author Name: Freebjb 7 Comments
Date Added: July 10, 2012 10:07:36 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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Type: Rhyming
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Aren't You Dying To Live?
Come hither,
Come wither,
With`in my arms...

Restrict him,
Fall victim,
To one of my charms,

And I,
Will die,
Within you...

And y'l die,
A death,
Of sin to(o),

Awake and elate-
As our friends dissipate,

y'l Forget that you've known them...
You won't feel alone when,

My blood hits your vein,
We'll call ourselves sane,

In a world full of crazies,
While pushing up daisies,

And dying to live...
Aren't you dying to live?
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichael on July 11, 2012 06:38:29 PM Report


 


Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on July 11, 2012 05:25:25 PM Report


nice flow of words and metering


well said the words come across


very well to me

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on July 11, 2012 04:27:22 AM Report


I was impressed by the rhythm and meter of this, a pleasure to read.


 


Bill Harborne

Comment By: Freejakemcqueen on July 10, 2012 11:58:40 AM Report
Dying to live, what a juxtafication?   J
Comment By: FreeJessica on March 2, 2009 12:54:17 AM Report
Well done!
Comment By: FreeDairine Bennett on February 4, 2009 01:48:40 PM Report

Wow

Really good ~



Comment By: Freekaitlynn on February 4, 2009 11:38:25 AM Report
this is really really pretty but i kinda didnt get what you were talking about but this is gorgous




 


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