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Author Name: Moderatorlostmysanity 5 Comments
Date Added: December 05, 2010 07:12:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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"Vows"

As I lay there and watched you sleep

Thoughts filled my mind

How did I find a sweet loving girl like you?

How could a girl like you love a guy like me?

You are so much more than you let yourself be

You are so much smarter then you let yourself believe

You beat on yourself for the path that life has made you go down

But there is a way back up

I will help you back up

Find that path of light again

Darkness may have fallen on you

But I will show you the light and keep on walking you through it

You are the love of my life

The girl I see myself with for the rest of my life

You are something truly special

Wish you could see it yourself

I will do all I can to make you see it

I will hold your hand through thickness and thin

I will hold your hand when you fall down

I will do all I can to bring you back to health whenever you get sick

I will be that shoulder whenever you need to cry

My arms will be open anytime you need that hug

Protection from the outside world

I take you as my wife

My loving

Sweet

Caring wife

To cherish forever

I fall asleep knowing youíre the one

That special one

My strength is there for you to grab if you need

My heart is there when you need to feel that extra bit of love

My soul is there whenever you feel alone

Remember girl youíre never alone

Youíve got me and Iíve got you

The fire burns deep with in us

Crackling every day we are together

The flame gets higher

The fire gets hotter

Life gets even more better

You are a dream come true

Remember I love you

Remember when you hear those three words

I mean it from the bottom of my soul and heart

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes:
To my wife to be.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 25, 2011 02:08:08 AM Report


Lovely description of the flush of  new love. I know the enthusiasm you feel. If I may be so bold, you depict yourself as the answer to all her problems. In a real love relationship, both get what they need from each other. We are all lost until we find someone to love. If this thing is real, she gives you just as much feeling of self worth as she gets form you....


PS.....

"Life gets even more better." That was the ONLY l;ine that clinked. More better makes you sound less intelligent than I know you are.....len


Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on December 4, 2010 10:51:38 PM Report


You are so much smarter then you let yourself believe.  I love the poem, but don't you mean than instead of then?  Damon


Comment By: FreeMaples on October 17, 2010 11:24:14 AM Report
This  is beautiful. I am getting married soon so I can truely appreciate your  words. I do wish every man was capable of expressing their feeling the way you have. Great work!

 

--Maples

Comment By: FreeLeila on January 18, 2010 11:18:08 PM Report
I hope such a  lover's dream come true! You indicate love in a simple, warm, honest way!
Comment By: PremiumEric Siedzikowski on August 20, 2009 04:42:04 AM Report
Life in motion for the poet is verily delineated here with pure unadulterated poetic genius.Great work once again.




 


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