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Author Name: Freela-la908 1 Comments
Date Added: January 09, 2009 02:01:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
dots sheilding my vision
while the circles spin my sight into the clouds
where I want to be held right now
the silence will replace everything loud
staring from the outside in
only half of me has the key
tears too afraid to fall just quiver
this numbness just won't leave me
scents of last night's loneliness
tempt my whole self to trip
no more roads to wander
and all my cards have worn rips
thinking but not making any sense
my secret wishes stored too deep
numbness takes my vision and body
and I'm left with a life I don't want to keep
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Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 10, 2009 11:31:46 AM Report
Mahalarose:  your writes are so sad.  Wishes for you to feel better about yourself.

Lady D


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