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Date Added: December 16, 2008 15:12:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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BYE-BYE-BYE



  Hugged me and said she'll surely love again,

than she left with my old, worn-out  backpack.

We took her there when she was only ten,

she remembers our walks along the tracks,

and life's true stories that she helped me pen.

Thought someday she might very well go back,

cottage living was so wonderful then,

seems like our best times remained in the past.




Only three lovers since her high school days,

enough for quite the woman she became.

A unique heart she passionately gave,

seeing her go, heartbroken once again.

You think how much you love her as she waves,

wish you could be with her to heal the pain.







Author's Notes:
written after my daughter's third broken heart.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on January 28, 2009 02:01:06 AM Report
Don't we wish. Heartache is just as devastating the third as it was the first time, and still the fifth. All we can do is be there and love them. Touching poem. ML
Comment By: FreeButterfly on January 14, 2009 10:21:01 PM Report
It is not an easy thing to watch your children in pain.

Nicely written.

~Butterfly

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on January 14, 2009 08:26:21 PM Report
You captured the angst of the broken heart perfectly here Raymond, great writing.  Henry
Comment By: FreeRin Marie on January 10, 2009 06:46:42 AM Report
I never knew the kind of love that I learned when my daughter was born....every tear, every owie, every shot, every cry hurts worse than anything that could happen to your body... I can't imagine what it must feel like to see your child hurting that badly and not be able to do a thing about it.  My heart goes out to you and your daughter.

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeKenneth Hoffman on December 19, 2008 10:25:04 AM Report
No matter that a break up could be a blessing in disguise, it still hurts.  Good write.

Bye the bye, don't take everything I write as fact, I like to use fiction in my poems to make my point. LOL

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on December 18, 2008 07:45:37 PM Report
It's hard when we want the best for our children.  Love how you wrote of the 10 year old and how it ties into your poem of unconditonal love. 
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on December 17, 2008 02:36:58 PM Report


Wonderously beautiful Raymond (and I do not bullshit)
The loving protective heart of a father is something my children missed
Alix

Comment By: FreeGlata on December 16, 2008 04:00:35 PM Report
Beautifully written, Raymond...

Watching our children suffer through heartaches and heartbreaks can be devastating...and we just want to make everything better for them.

Well done...Very well done!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 16, 2008 03:52:18 PM Report
Oh, Yeah...boy I can relate to this kind of pain..but its a pain we all have to heal alone...
Great to see you posting again..
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on December 16, 2008 03:50:40 PM Report
Raymond-  Been there with my children.  Oh that you could banish  the mistakes from their lives that we also made; unfortunately we tend to learn best as a species, when we get "stung" by life's cruelties.  All we can do is (this seems so self-serving), unconditionally love them.     Bruce




 


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