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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 13 Comments
Date Added: December 12, 2008 16:12:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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And Time Passes

Two people in love

And time passes

I wonder who we are now

While a memory flashes

 

Carefully slipping into our lives

And watch the day begin

As we navigate life

Do we still hold it deep within

 

A feeling escapes from me

And goes out to the one I love

I want you to keep it close

This is all that I can be sure of

 

Did we move forward

And leave something behind

This fear is gripping me

With another day what I will find

 

 

 

 

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Life inspires me but this is just a poem.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on June 4, 2009 12:27:12 PM Report
Life changes us and all we can do is hold on loosely but not let go.
Beautiful.  ~Pamela

Comment By: FreeJanice Herzog on February 4, 2009 02:08:22 PM Report
Dear Steve:  Very touching, and romantic too.  Love it.  Love, Janjan xoxo
Comment By: FreeButterfly on January 11, 2009 11:05:49 PM Report
This is a nice piece here, Steve and as always a joy to read.

Hugs,

Butterfly

Comment By: FreeAngel on January 11, 2009 08:28:47 AM Report
Wonderful Steve

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 19, 2008 04:30:48 PM Report
I always enjoy your thoughts. Nice work Steve!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on December 16, 2008 05:22:35 AM Report

I wonder who we are now


While a memory flashes

 

I love that line, Shady..As humans, we are always in flux. We're never quite the same person as we were yesterday...len

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on December 15, 2008 06:48:11 AM Report
Insightful piece Steve and nicely written, Joe
Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on December 14, 2008 10:23:01 AM Report
This is a good piece of insight into a long term relationship. I really like it particularly the line "A feeling escapes from me" I think we all know when that has happened to us.. I enjoyed this poem written in an easy free style, and it has a soft voice about it..
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on December 13, 2008 05:35:15 PM Report
Good content and flow.
I like this Steve.

Fletch

Comment By: FreeLorraina on December 13, 2008 10:03:08 AM Report
Funny how an inspired poem touches other peoples lives Steve.....This was very close to "some" of my own thoughts..Just off again house hunting Spain.. just popped in to say hi!  good write Connie
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on December 12, 2008 08:34:56 PM Report
Hi Steve,
Very good write. Love is always a daily lesson in our lives, learn and move past.
Hugs,
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 12, 2008 06:47:53 PM Report
We all have memories both good and bad  we all remember and hoping we learn from them... Your poetry always tugs at my heart my dear
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freejanice etienne on December 12, 2008 05:11:05 PM Report
I think i understand .... I still think that tomorrow is an advanture and the moments of yesterday is gone and what is done is done you just have to make the best out of everything for time is not forever destined.




 


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