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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 13 Comments
Date Added: December 05, 2008 12:12:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your Presence

Our proximity to each other

Is not measured in physical distance

Within us emotions run parallel

A wish whispered into the wind

I ache so to feel your presence

Words take flight softly on angel wings

A warm breeze swirls around me

I am being caressed as leaves sway

In this time for this moment so fleeting

You are with me in every way

No longer alone with my thoughts

I breath you deep in to my soul

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on April 21, 2009 05:00:31 AM Report
Oh I love the last line.  Gorgeous piece my dear!
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 13, 2009 06:15:41 PM Report
Very spiritual stuff, Shady...Just lovely thoughts, very well written...len
Comment By: FreeButterfly on December 18, 2008 10:49:34 AM Report
Wow... beautiful words here Steve, I really like this!

~Butterfly~

Comment By: FreeJennifer on December 11, 2008 08:16:11 AM Report
my favorite line, is words take flight on angel wings! Idon't know why it speaks to me! the whole poem is really nice!
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on December 11, 2008 08:15:28 AM Report
OOHHH Steve, you ole smoothy you! Very nicely done, Joe
Comment By: FreeRachel on December 9, 2008 08:52:45 PM Report

I love the first three lines the best, and the way it ends as well. Very romantic, I like it.


Comment By: FreeAngel on December 6, 2008 06:00:57 AM Report

You are with me in every way


No longer alone with my thoughts


I breath you deep in to my soul

 

How romantic Steve beautiful

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeIsaac 'Slimx' on December 6, 2008 12:18:13 AM Report
Amazing...thats all I can say...Thanks for sharing.
Comment By: FreeAmy on December 5, 2008 08:37:40 PM Report
This has a real dreamy feel to it. Very romantic.

I like it.

~Amy

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on December 5, 2008 08:14:54 PM Report
steve, great poem.......your showing your sensitive side, john
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on December 5, 2008 07:43:00 PM Report
Steve,
Truly a beauty here, excellent write!
When love is present, you can feel it all around you even if your miles apart.
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 5, 2008 03:44:39 PM Report
Exquisite warm sentiments Steve. Very nice penning.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 5, 2008 01:00:06 PM Report
Sighssss...as I read the whispered words of love your romantic heart could woe any woman
with your poetic charm..
Your love poems shows the charming ways
of your loving heart
 Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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