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Author Name: Premiumla-la908 1 Comments
Date Added: November 20, 2008 03:11:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Hopeless
Sleep threatens my world to end
this ever present nightmare
mind full of thoughtless rubbish
into the darkness my eyes stare
 
thoughts colliding
mind exploding
thrown into this nightmare
 
pain leaks to fill my rips
the rips then tear apart
waterfalls of myself cascade out
in a red torrent of art
 
help is a needle
gathered waterfalls drift blindly
sleep taunts my mind
and the haystack is the sea
 
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Comment By: FreeChristy on November 21, 2008 10:24:01 AM Report
love it!!!


 


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