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Author Name: Freemaybememories 4 Comments
Date Added: November 19, 2008 00:11:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Blood and Math
Are you in? Because happiness in my life is integral
And you run in my veins like life proves we are existential
You have the power to stay and really make a differential
And I don't need a heart beat to know that you are instrumental
I've been sure to add everything you don't say and subtract the nonessential
And we all need blood to live, but breathing is just as influential
Are we part of the same equation, do you even think we have potential?
Because pain has circulated through my system before and it was detrimental
At the first sign it's not right, I'm stopping because problems grow exponential
I know there are plenty of donors to match my blood type; yours is not essential

I won't ever depend on my heart again, because bleeding can't be clotted with serum
And since math is never wrong I will only rely on my mind to solve the proof of our theorem

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on December 7, 2008 09:57:48 AM Report
great write,SHOAIB
after crunching the numbers and emotions,it all adds up
 very creative piece

Micky


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 19, 2008 09:27:12 AM Report
Reading you always amazes me with your classic style always brilliant thoughts about life.. you are a blessing indeed..
 You keep writing I will read.
~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreeHeidi Campbell on November 19, 2008 07:55:36 AM Report
Very well written, well composed, and well thought of....so in essence, in numbers and blood, and theory and truth, what is does the purpose of a heart truly mean??? If it's not for love, blood, feeling or survival, then even in biological terms it's useless....it's not the number of beats that gets to me, it's the number of times its numb...because when it's numb, even to feeling, or love, or blood, or survival, it has finally died.....very good poem, with a very good point...although I've analyzed it beyond belief...lol, but you know me...haha, very well done Shoaib!!!
Comment By: FreeRachel on November 19, 2008 02:26:33 AM Report
this is classic shoaib, innovative with metaphors and subject, sick rhyming and flow that just is naturally beautiful. its also unique to you, the ability to write about love and math and science so few attempt such  and none do it so amazingly well. i'm utterly floored with your work. i'd quote and cite exactly what i loved and why but that would include the entire poem so i'll save the space and just say.....

wow.





 


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