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Author Name: FreeCristian Dolon 2 Comments
Date Added: September 28, 2008 22:09:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
A Rose
Today I found a rose...
Also many set in a row.

Then it started raining...
And I was left waiting.

Everyone around were moving so fast...
As I was left there alone in my own past.

Finally the city became deserted...
But the thought in my mind wasn't diverted.

I started to think so many things...
All the songs that you would sing.

Especially the very day we met...
As I kept wondering I took out a cigarette.

I remember how your hair played with the breeze...
Just thinking about it all makes my heart freeze.

I thought I was a man with a lot of luck...
When the deepest parts of my heart you struck.

When you finally get here...
I will tell you sweet things in your ear.

Or maybe just give you the little rose...
Either one or the other I suppose.

I just pick out this little rose as I wait...
Here under the rain for you on our first date.

I want to see your smile and hear your voice...
Every moment with you my heart sings in rejoice.

Or maybe we can just stand there...
Looking at each other and go nowhere.

How about we go skipping, running or walking...
Or maybe hugging, kissing, loving or talking?

The whole world will know...
Of our love as it will show.

Should I tell you how my love for you grows and grows...
Or just keep it all inside and give you the rose?

I can't wait for when we finally get together...
Until then I'll let my love select what is better.
Author's Notes:
A first date can mean forever.
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 17, 2008 03:13:41 PM Report
Woman love roses always remember that...
 This is so adorable...
 I remember my first date so long ago...
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on September 29, 2008 08:39:17 AM Report
Very true.  A first date could be the beginning of the rest of your life. 
Beautiful illustrated here.  A very special piece.
Adri x


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