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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 10 Comments
Date Added: September 26, 2008 14:09:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Feeling love
You get a funny feeling
A sort of weird sensation
That you sense right down to your soul
You wonder just what it is
But down deep you already know
Your mind has become fixated
All focus is lost
Because she's there, always there
From the moment you wake
Until you close your eyes
Then dream of her all night
All of a sudden
A light comes on in your mind
In fact, it's been there all along
No, you're not sick or ailing
As everything turns clear
You start to put the pieces in place
When she's gone, you miss her
You just feel like you have to give her a call
Then comes the most telling sign
You doubt if you can live without her
The evidence is irrefutable
You're in love
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJanice Herzog on March 12, 2009 12:38:21 PM Report
Dear Henry:  So filled with love.   Written from your heart. Love, Janjan xoxo
Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 18, 2008 04:33:51 PM Report
Very perceptive and full of deep and hidden meaning.  It reads smoothly and gives you something to think about.  A very emotional piece
Lubs.

Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on September 29, 2008 09:53:11 AM Report
I've gone through this daily for almost 40 years. You express it so well. jp
Comment By: FreeAngel on September 27, 2008 01:19:12 PM Report
A light comes on in your mind

In fact, it's been there all along

No, you're not sick or ailing

As everything turns clear

You start to put the pieces in place

When she's gone, you miss her

You just feel like you have to give her a call

Then comes the most telling sign

You doubt if you can live without her

The evidence is irrefutable

You're in love

 

And this is what love is Henry chicken ....missing that person from your very soul.

 

Loved it

 

Love Angelxx

 

Comment By: FreeGlata on September 26, 2008 10:25:05 PM Report
Beautiful, Henry! You always know how to express it so clearly!
Loved each line of this...
Big hugs!
Glata
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on September 26, 2008 09:30:13 PM Report
Actually Henry, I call it gas! LOL! Nice piece of writing here, Joe
Comment By: FreeGee on September 26, 2008 08:08:16 PM Report
I know this feeling.....Awwww....
Haaaa....it makes me smile by thinking of it...
Its always wonderful to have this feeling Henry....
Lovely Write Henry....
Muaahhh!!!!
Hugs and Love,
Gee xxxxx

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on September 26, 2008 04:37:22 PM Report
Charming poem, Henry! :o)

Makes me want to write one of my own....think I might...

Thanks for the sparks, fellow poet.

Hugs,
Pamela


Comment By: FreeCathy on September 26, 2008 04:01:23 PM Report
Sounds like pure and true love to me how wonderful and so very beautiful to have that precious gem.. Just as they amazing poem is such a precious gem. Filled with your heart and soul Love it
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 26, 2008 03:15:43 PM Report
Henry,
 I think we all know the feelings and it scares us all to death...
When two people really connect it leaves you with such needs the aching
and longing just to be together .
 I just hope all your dreams come true
 To have a future you have to let  your past life go.
A big gamble to take for the embracing arms of love..
 Hugs ~ She Whispers


When she's gone, you miss her

You just feel like you have to give her a call

Then comes the most telling sign

You doubt if you can live without her

The evidence is irrefutable

You're in love





 


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