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Author Name: FreeTheMindMaker 1 Comments
Date Added: September 23, 2008 19:09:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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80 Proof

80 Proof

Never thought Iíd be like this
Once again I take the dive
Night after night, I kill myself
Just so I can feel alive

The musicís loud, the lights are down
The partyís in full-force
Iíve had a few, the edge is off
The bottle takes its course

I see you dancing on the floor
Itís the way you move your hips
That always brings me straight to you
And draws me to your lips

How meaningful this moment seems
Yet how meaningless thereof
This drunken, feigned affection
As close as I come to love

So line me up a couple shots
Iím already three behind
These blurry memories of you
Are forever in my mind

Author's Notes:
Inspired from a party I was at a few months ago. It's was kind of an realization of why I was actually doing what I was.

Critiquing is always welcome, or just let me know what you think. I'd really appreciate it. Hope everyone likes it. Thanks!
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 23, 2008 08:13:30 PM Report
To much booze... lost are the thoughts after sleep..
I use to drink to much once..not anymore...
 ~ She Whispers





 


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