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Author Name: FreeWicked Attraction 3 Comments
Date Added: September 21, 2008 01:09:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Secrets
She so beautifully cries like a bleeding rose
tears dripping off her cute little nose
but no one knows,
this is the feeling she shows
she really isn't honestly there
these feelings she just can't bare

she cries herself to sleep
where she is left to eternally weep
in her heart is where she'll keep
the secrets that'll forever seep

not so slender body, but beautiful in her own way
no one knows that she died today
think whatever they may,
her secrets, with her, will forever stay

uncover the truth, and you'll ball
this is the angel who had to fall
she's the one who made the call
just to have no life at all

she so gracefully grabbed that knife
she wanted to end all her strife
she'll never be a great wife
because today, she ended her life

she hated to pretend
thought all her problems would end
to god, her life she would lend,
then her to him, he would send

she'd never go to prom
she'd never have a favorite song
her life didn't seem so long
she'd never be a soccer mom

she'd never get to see old stars shine
she'd never get to finely dine
she'd never have a man to call " mine"
she'd never see her children out of line

she'd never get to see weeping willows again
she'd never feel anymore pain
she'd never hear her friends call her insane
she'd never live life, in the fast lane

She'd never see herself get old
she'd never see old pictures fold
she'd never have her old teddy bear to hold
but most of all, her secrets will never be told

so sit there and just cry
because she couldn't bare another lie
let out a sorrowful sigh
because this angel, wanted to die.
Author's Notes:
Indeed.
This Angel wanted to die.

Not that I am an angel mind you. I was just sad at the time.
School was stressing me. Friends weren't there for me. I felt alone. I felt unwanted.
Yeah..

Thanks for reading.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on October 4, 2008 04:29:17 PM Report
Deep superb write. Full og raw emotions that poured out of the heart. How I have felt this way alone and unloved. It is a sad, lonely feeling knowing others are not by your side. Hurts like hell I know hun. Hoping things are better for you now.....

 

Hugs

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on September 22, 2008 09:12:57 PM Report
This is so terribly depressing Wicked Attraction. Exceptionally good, well-balanced rhymes here so full of deep emotions. Keep writing em down apparently it lightens the load. check out my "Being I" and " Owl & Prey " Enjoy.

Comment By: FreeKasia Helena Drazek on September 21, 2008 03:34:36 PM Report
you are an amazing writer

I love the way you write

and I love how you

describe these emotions

Brilliant

xxx

 





 


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