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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 6 Comments
Date Added: September 16, 2008 19:09:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Aged Eyes
Affections are as thoughts that dwell
forever in his lingering mind

Feelings of sorrow sadness and longing
the mist resembles rain tears

Dreadfully staring through destiny's day
now owning his estranged mind
through heartache weakness
~**~


Feeling have changed in his helpless heart
by his own harsh silent evidence


His soft heart still refuses this insanity
no more brutal tears will
ever fill his aged eyes



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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on September 23, 2008 09:09:18 AM Report
Wonderful words written by a beautiful poetess
Comment By: FreeChris B on September 17, 2008 12:30:34 AM Report
Oooooh! I like this. This is quite different and really shows your diversity as a writer. Such a great portrayal of intense heartache mixed with a bit of denial...Very fine write...

Chris

Comment By: FreeGee on September 16, 2008 10:52:13 PM Report
One of God greatest gift-YOU...

Wonderful heartfelt word...

Hugs and love,

Gee xxx

Comment By: FreeCathy on September 16, 2008 10:43:59 PM Report
I have said that so many times yet the tears still keep coming.  Love this every wonderful heartfelt word. And as Fletch said these aged eyes see also you are for sure truly gifted with your wonderful words
.......love and hugs Cathy

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on September 16, 2008 09:02:29 PM Report
You are gifted !

Thats what these aged eyes see!
Fletch

Comment By: FreeS on September 16, 2008 07:30:08 PM Report
awesome as usual

shoaib





 


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