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Author Name: FreeLadyDragonwyck 12 Comments
Date Added: September 07, 2008 13:09:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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An Eerie Stillness Shrouds the Garden

An eerie stillness shrouds the garden

Wind chimes sway but no melody floats forth

Hummingbirds and butterflies take refuge behind

    Large garden shrubs

My furry-fuzzy dogs, ears perked, stand at attention

 

Zig zag lightning dominates the sky

An eerie stillness shrouds the garden

Glittery mist forms a curtain near my patio table

I sip my creamy coffee and observe

 

The sky darkness melts into various shades of blue

A shape begins to materialize in the misty curtain

An eerie stillness shrouds the Garden

My dogs sit as the Wraith approaches the table

 

the wraith smiles, says hello and sits at the    table

I calmly welcome him and enquire about his visit

He says he wanted to visit a calm place where he would be accepted for a few hours

We chat, share coffee, and enjoy a coffee break

In time

 

Too soon, the wraith smiles and says he must be gone

I tell him he is always welcome at my dwelling

The wraith shakes my hand, smiles and walks to

The mist

As his glittery shape dissolves, he whispers

I shall return

 

an eerie stillness shrouds the garden

 

Author's Notes:
Miss Alison Storm Wolf's poem got me thinking and here is a "wraith" from my garden....
Thank you Ali
 
 
Lady D
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeM J W Hayes on August 10, 2009 05:01:08 AM Report
Spooky and interestingly, for me, had different levels of meaning.

Michael

Comment By: FreeMitch on September 25, 2008 05:54:39 PM Report
An amazing poem. I can see everything which you write.

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on September 17, 2008 02:36:12 PM Report
Wow. At least he didn't invite you to join him. If he does, you must remember that you have to stay here. You hear me? You HAVE to stay here! ML
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 15, 2008 06:09:57 PM Report
KOOL!!...len
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on September 12, 2008 06:40:01 PM Report
A wonderful, image laden write Lady D., might the wraith be an early visit from old man winter?  Henry
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 9, 2008 02:57:13 AM Report
Oh gorgeous!  You write so vividly.  I can smell the garden! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 8, 2008 10:21:28 AM Report
Oh this is amazing poem so visual with just the right words place in the guarden... I know he will return!!
 I love this new style!!
 Love ya! She Whispers

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on September 7, 2008 06:21:56 PM Report
Though you welcomed the wraith, I had serious inhibitions for you Lady!Always take caution when you invite an entity to drop by any time...!!! :o)

Beautifully woven Lady D.

...had me convinced!....

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeA.P. on September 7, 2008 05:24:29 PM Report
interesting, i enjoyed your phrasing very much...gentle alliteration and imagery that paints a 3-D backyard view.  and through its beauty an "eerie stillness" sprouting from within the lines as well, giving this an interesting atmosphere. nicely written.

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 7, 2008 04:02:36 PM Report
Well keep on his good side for the love of god LOL

I really enjoyed this and "saw" it all as it happened.

Ali x

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on September 7, 2008 02:19:11 PM Report
This is the best of what I read of yours so far. New words, arrangement, balance,  mystery, deep and meaningful. I also sat at your coffee table and winked a congrats, for you have handled the situation well.

Comment By: FreeCathy on September 7, 2008 02:14:19 PM Report
I really enjoyed this incrediable write so glad Ali inspired this Excellent and very interesting write you kept me interested until the end LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
........Cathy





 


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