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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 7 Comments
Date Added: September 07, 2008 13:09:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A faded rose ~ Gee & Henry M. ~
I sit alone in the dark
hoping that you'll soon be here,
I suffer while crying
knowing that you'll no longer be near
 
What was the force that drove us apart
Just what made you want me no more
Tracks of tears staining my heart
Alone in the dark, waiting for your knock on my door

Why didn't you tell me you want to go
At least give me a reason  I will understand
I stayed true to you, now you just ignore
You disappear, so where do I stand?

All my hopes and dreams fade away
I believe now I am just dreaming
I'll be alone again just like everyday
I wish you hear my heart  screaming

All I needed was some honesty
Don't hand me a hat full of lies
Now I live with the heartbreak you've left me
You couldn't keep from wearing a disguise
 
Alone in the dark, my heart clouded in doubt
What happened to the love I thought I knew
You were the one I couldn't live without
Now I have found that it just wasn't true

Now, on I will go and never look back
Though my heart is empty and I feel exposed
I'll continue walking on a lonely track
As I am a just like a faded rose

Author's Notes:
Gee, your words in this really put an ache into the heart, I hope that my words have helped to ease that ache. Thanks once again for the opportunity to write with you.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJennifer on January 29, 2009 12:32:10 PM Report
an ending that tears at the heart strings! I think you two write wonderfully together! This is really good!
jen

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 8, 2008 10:18:10 AM Report
This is what love does to the deserted heart....so faithful and still he cast your love aside ...I know all about this kind of so called love!! So sorry my dear friend another bitter lesson in life!!hugs and Love ~ She Whisper
(((Now, on I will go and never look back
Though my heart is empty and I feel exposed
I'll continue walking on a lonely track
As I am a just like a faded rose

Comment By: FreeGlata on September 8, 2008 06:10:46 AM Report
Tearful and sad...and it made my heart ache,  indeed! Both of you put a lot into  this, and it really  reached deep.

Very well done, and very heart rending!

Hugs to ya  both...

Glata

Comment By: FreeGee on September 8, 2008 02:26:15 AM Report
Henry,

I wish could hold my tears when I read this poem...

Thank you very much again for this wonderful poem and your ever bits of your verse really do touched my heart.

Hugs and love,

Gee xx

Comment By: FreeAngel on September 7, 2008 03:19:12 PM Report
This was wonderful a superb write by two great poets. Really well written together

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeCathy on September 7, 2008 02:17:08 PM Report
Once again you two just flow perfectly, beautiful and yet very sad love it
Excellent you two!!!!!!!!
.......Cathy

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on September 7, 2008 01:28:12 PM Report
Very romantic, sad and tender Henry and Gee. Nicely done! Joe




 


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