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Author Name: Freeramonathompson 1 Comments
Date Added: September 05, 2008 22:09:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Aids V 2

A little slip is never all the fault of just one person
In an instant why are so quick to judge what we don't understand?
Dump your outragous fears and broaden your narrow-minded views
Shut up and quit blaming this sad epidemic on others

When you know the sad truth of the matter is this
Aids is not just the fault of some of us

It is the fault of us all!

2008 Ramona Thompson

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Comment By: FreeS on September 8, 2008 09:59:40 PM Report
I like how you are attacking things from 2 different perspectives
Its great that you your stances are so aware

I would suggest tho that you put them both in one poem
maybe with a strong transition in the middle

but your way works well too





 


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