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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 5 Comments
Date Added: September 04, 2008 20:09:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Blood Moon
I felt my pulsating mind for more thoughts
 my paralzying heart sends shock waves
smashing hidden desperation

~**~


Desperate were the last existing moments
dragging down with mental  telepathy

~**~

Was the blood moon a mere blood clot
that was the main artery
to the stitching sky

~**~


Would the startled night reach out to save
the colors of a awakening day

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 9, 2008 04:37:54 AM Report
I liked the way you added the coloured font to the last two verses reflecting the words Ali x

Comment By: FreeCathy on September 7, 2008 10:14:11 AM Report
Another exceptional write here just love it,


Would the startled night reach out to save
the colors of a awakening day

really love this ending once again
........love and hugs Cathy

Comment By: FreeAngel on September 6, 2008 11:22:26 AM Report
Lovely She. Like the use of different shades
Comment By: FreeS on September 4, 2008 10:15:05 PM Report
so so sweet !
maybe the last line could be yellow for sunshine!

best,
shoaib

Comment By: FreeChris B on September 4, 2008 08:39:12 PM Report

Mesmerizing, the final two questions that you left unanswered add so much value and meaning to the poem. Very well done.


Chris






 


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