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Author Name: Freemaybememories 5 Comments
Date Added: September 02, 2008 10:09:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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umbrella ella ella a a
I wouldn't shelter you from the rain
I'm not going to be there when its cloudy and gray
And when a storm comes don't look my way
I know you're scared of the thunder and lightening just the same
And I'm not going to be there, but just let me explain...

Because when you're with me you will never even get a chance to see a rainy day
There is no need for tissues when there are no tears that need to be wiped away


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMISS_VEE on September 8, 2008 02:11:31 PM Report
Aww this is really sweet Shoaib. I really enjoyed reading this poem

 

I hate the song though lol a a a ....

Comment By: FreeCathy on September 7, 2008 10:43:19 AM Report
Awe that is so very sweet,

"Because when you're with me you will never even get a chance to see a rainy day
There is no need for tissues when there are no tears that need to be wiped away "

The thought of that just melts me Excellent and perfect in every word and the perfect ending
.........Cathy

Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on September 5, 2008 12:48:40 AM Report
Any girl is lucky to get a guy like you!  Beautiful write, Shoaib!

 

~Shanna

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 2, 2008 08:49:14 PM Report
Your muse is in overdrive a fast get away for sure...I have become a loyal fan of yours..beautiful heartfelt poetry...
 ~ She Whisper

Comment By: FreeRachel on September 2, 2008 10:59:30 AM Report
ohhhh, i love how it ended. this is just so simple and sweet and i can really feel the love you put into this.

Do i even have to tell you that you and your writing is amazing? = )





 


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