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Date Added: September 01, 2008 11:09:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A conversation over coffee ~Gee & Henry M. ~
A conversation over coffee
 
 
 
 
 
 
        coffee

 mitch0722

 
 

In a coffee shop somewhere in the world
Sister talks to Brother, a conversation unfurled

I am slightly sad and my heart is heavy today
Why do I feel the pain when I am in love anyway

Shall I wait or shall I retreat
Maybe this love is only a one sided street
 
The weight on your heart is the love you carry
Find out where that love stands, don't tarry
 
Never retreat, move steadily ahead
Even though the answer is one you may dread.

I still have hope and I am still waiting
will he ever see it's for him my heart's beating 

I am afraid that it will happen again
Love will disappear without a chance to begin

Maybe I am just not lucky
Oh my dear brother, I feel very lonely....
 
Hold onto your hope, but don't wait forever
Love's out there hiding, being quite  clever
 
Don't fret the past over what's happened before
There will be more opportunities knocking at your door
 
Luck may not be on your side this day
My dear sister, with love you'll find your way

I hope someday I can have someone who loves me
But right now, it is only love in my dreams I can see

I try not to cry but  tears keep falling on my cheek
I try to be strong but at times I feel so weak

I will still smile though my heart still feels the pain
Having hope someday my heart will smile again
 
There will be someone who is worthy of your love
A man with a hand that fits your like a glove
 
Please don't you cry, let me wipe your tears away
There will be one who will see the great heart you display
 
When looking at you, a very pretty woman I see
My beautiful Sister, having coffee with me
 
With that they rose, she thanked him and hugged him tight
Out the door they went, his arm around her, talking into the night

Author's Notes:
Gee, this is a write that I am very proud of, it came out just as we expected it to and more! Thank you for choosing me as your co-writer.
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGlata on September 2, 2008 02:21:52 PM Report
It's wonderful to have a sibling of heart that cares for you so much...and the two of you, though naybe not siblings by blood, are still siblings of heart...and it shows.

Very touching and filled with openness and wisdom.

Gee, little sister, listen closely to your big brother here...he's got some very wise answers!

Love to ya both!

Glata

Comment By: FreeGee on September 1, 2008 10:02:09 PM Report
Henry,

I find this poem REALLY touched my heart very deeply.

No much words I could convey my gratitute to you...

but I hope you know it....

Thank you for writing this together with me.

Many hug and love,

Gee xxx

 

 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 1, 2008 02:54:38 PM Report
This is a great poem you two have written do hope you both do this again... Hugs ~ She Whisper


Comment By: FreeAngel on September 1, 2008 01:52:45 PM Report
A really amazing fabulous write. Without support,love and affection we feel so lost.

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 1, 2008 01:26:15 PM Report
Very cool...so much said here and wisdom infused in the lines. Good job you two!

 

~Barbara~ *who needed to read this today*





 


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