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Author Name: Premiumskipinpin 11 Comments
Date Added: August 29, 2008 22:08:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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OWL & PREY




Owl & Prey



Wisdom camouflage,
in tinted tan-greys,
wing-tipped fingers
scribbling in air,
sketch its silent flight at sunset.

The great owl feels the heat,
see's the sightless,
is earnestly tuned,
to decibels of silence.

Plunging through darkness,
like shadows flash in dreams,
A silhouette clasps its prey,
swoops inches from abyss,
challenges fate every day.

Shame on those of us
so easily ingested by our
fabled depressive holes.
What weakness disguised,
we pretend perturb our souls?

Like the owl, we too must ride
the pendulum in similar ways.
Live our lives intensely,
feel passion's warmth,
hear a loving heart beat,
for there is no second chance in time
to relish precious moments passing.


Author's Notes:
Hope this write belittles problems which deprive us of sleep.  "AUTUMN" is coming, look for it.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLorraine Cole on October 13, 2008 05:02:26 PM Report
Hello Raymond,nice to meet you! What a wonderful read,great expression..thankyou for sharing..Lorraine..(and thanks for your comment)
Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on October 12, 2008 12:49:37 AM Report
What a gorgeous and deep philosophy you have pointed out dear sir in this poem.... It is really pricking and instigating the brain to ponder on various dimensions of the odds and ends of life!
Comment By: FreeBen Hurt on October 8, 2008 08:49:26 PM Report
Breathtaking words of wisdom loved how you tied it together using this magnificent bird, going in my favs
Comment By: FreeKeri on October 6, 2008 07:11:28 PM Report
Looking back is dangerous.  There are times where I allow myself to sleep into thought and venture into the minds of those that I've left behind or have left me behind.  It makes for good writes sometimes.  I thank you for directing me to this poem.

 

It is important to move forward and to live life day by day.  Strong words of advice.

 

Always,
~Keri

Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on September 22, 2008 10:52:56 PM Report
Like the owl, we too must ride.  I loved that...

And your opening stanza grabbed hard.  Good work with this one.  I enjoyed this very much. ~Pamela
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 7, 2008 02:19:57 PM Report

Raymond:  great write.  Loved the phrase "ride the pendulum in similar ways"....


 


Lady D


Comment By: FreeCathy on September 7, 2008 10:21:03 AM Report
This is for sure a exceptional write, I really enjoyed this very much very wise and hopeful poem love it Second chance are definately all around us for the taking Excellent
.......Cathy

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on September 6, 2008 07:51:16 PM Report
I feel that we do get second chances. Some of us have been blessed with that. Although we can't live exact moments in time, we can get that second chance. Another intelligent piece Raymond, Joe
Comment By: FreeCassandra on September 4, 2008 12:15:52 PM Report
Wow. A great poem. Very artsy I think. Much more advanced then what I'm used to!

 

Great write!

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 30, 2008 07:17:07 PM Report
Sage advice shared with finesse! Great comparison (using the owl) & a lovely strong closing. =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 29, 2008 10:50:16 PM Report

This poem reveals how fast time fleets
 we don't have a second chance to live ..
We must live life to the fullest now..
Taste life and savor the sweetness
.embrace your fears and just reach out and enjoy
the Autumn years are so colored with such vividness
 So much to do and love ..
Oh you have chosen your words well
in this brilliant poem
I am glad I stayed up till you posted it ..
Thank you thoughts to ponder .
Your friend ~ She Whispers


Like the owl, we too must
ride
the pendulum in similar
ways.
Live our lives intensely,
feel passion's warmth,
hear a loving heart beat,
for there is no second
chance in time
to relish precious moments
passing.









 


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