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Date Added: August 23, 2008 15:08:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Awakened

               AWAKENED


Itís true, once being exposed to reality,
legal bonds and lethal bombs do exist.
War lords again planning unfair profits,
cindered lives of mass destruction targets,
worst kind killers these perverted misfits.

Patriots of billion-heirs or is it country?

With goals of life increasingly entwined,
confused by ambiguities of sentiment,
ungrateful stalkers speculate from behind.
Lost liberties when lured into commitments,
too soon, becoming wealth's loyal servants.

Lost in labyrinths of the establishment
bloody fingers scratching walls to exit
arms reaching out, desperately intent,
on pulling anguish to the other side.
Another poor wretched soul buried alive.

Meanwhile, in early morning, just awoken,
I should not hesitate to photograph,
all those beautiful wild horses taken,
by rustling cowboys from North of Telegraph.

As in seasons past, will be led this great herd
to roam over Yukon's frozen pastures.
The fittest will surely survive Winter
for it's not our dollar that they are after.




Author's Notes:
started shortly after Viet-Nam in 68 dedicated to good people like the author of "Ghost letter to President Bush" posted on this site and other poets expressing similar meanings and to Canadian General Dallaire.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on October 3, 2008 12:28:57 PM Report
This is wonderful!!!

I find your words powerful, in all its honesty and forth-coming in the reality of what world we

live in.. I am so glad I took a peek into this amazing piece...

 

Hugs,

~MoonStar~

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on September 7, 2008 12:28:02 AM Report
WOW. \

Touching Words

You are gifted Brother

Fletch

Comment By: FreeCathy on August 23, 2008 08:40:18 PM Report
I really enjoyed this honest and truthful poem as she whisper said very up front love it every word Excellent write
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 23, 2008 03:38:55 PM Report
Wow.. I am just blown away by the poem you have written...So up front with your truthful words that express and explain.
Really a interesting poem I just had to read twice..
 Oh, I posted a poem with your words in it.. Thank you I hope you read it!!
~ She Whispers






 


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