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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 23 Comments
Date Added: August 20, 2008 01:08:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Timeless

 

As if a pebble were dropped in a still pond

 

Our love is growing in ever widening circles

 

Deliberate and precise eternal movement

 

A timeless bond brings an unseen symmetry
 
Two lives formed into an unbreakable ring

 

 

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJonathan McCollum on July 26, 2010 10:10:27 PM Report
you can say so much in 5 lines. well played.
Comment By: FreesHeRi on January 12, 2010 03:01:33 PM Report
wonderful poem-full of inspiring words.

Congrats

Sheri

Comment By: FreesHeRi on January 12, 2010 02:49:55 PM Report
wonderful poem-full of inspiring words.

Congrats

Sheri

Comment By: FreeBlack on July 7, 2009 07:42:27 PM Report
A few lines of genius.

That's impressive. Paint me envious.

Comment By: FreeJennifer on January 13, 2009 08:40:20 PM Report
this is so awesome! Beauty from start to finish

Jen

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on January 13, 2009 07:47:36 PM Report
Awesome work Steve.  Much deserving of an award.

 

 

Comment By: FreeAJ on January 12, 2009 10:08:28 PM Report
short and sweet. awesome poem, steve!


...if only you didn't root for 'cuse... hahaha

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on January 12, 2009 09:35:53 PM Report
Steve,
I am so glad to see you have won a Featured Poem Award, way to go!
This is truly a beautiful write, reminds me alittle of one I once wrote called
"Gaps In Our Circle". Congratulations!
~Tracie

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on January 12, 2009 09:22:19 PM Report
" until they reach the shore, loving forever more, they phase out to a distant shore, enticing us all to come along " Wow, how this write inspired me .. love it ... CONGRATULATIONS  well-deserving.

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on January 12, 2009 12:35:40 PM Report
There's a touch of magic in this. I am moved. Good work. ML
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 12, 2009 11:06:12 AM Report
Steve:  congratulations on this Feature Poem Award...very deserved.

Lady D

Comment By: FreeKimber Turpin on January 12, 2009 12:22:30 AM Report
Steve, this is a very beautiful piece and well deserving of the award. Congrats!

Gypsy

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on January 11, 2009 10:38:07 PM Report
I commented below Steve, now I have to say congrats on the award. Joe
Comment By: FreeAmy on January 11, 2009 10:36:47 PM Report
I loved the line 'Our love is growing in ever widening circles'. That's a lovely thought.

Congrats, Steve.

hugs

~Amy

Comment By: FreeRohit Sapra on September 26, 2008 01:48:32 PM Report
These verses describe the meaning of ever lasting very beautifully. Very Nice Poem this one is.
Comment By: FreeAdri on August 26, 2008 01:50:25 PM Report
Great piece here Steve! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeAngel on August 24, 2008 03:28:34 PM Report
Fantastic poem Steve
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 20, 2008 07:56:11 PM Report
Steve,
 My dear friend..seems you have just written another amazing poem... Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 20, 2008 05:46:20 PM Report
A great analogy, Steve..This is a very peaceful and positive look at love.....len
Comment By: FreeCathy on August 20, 2008 04:30:58 PM Report
A perfect and breautiful poem here you really have outdone yourself.  Loved it every word of it Just perfect!!!!!!!!
.......Cathy

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on August 20, 2008 05:56:45 AM Report
steve, the romantic air in syracuse has affected you. nice poem,john
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on August 20, 2008 05:30:19 AM Report
Nicely done Steve, very tender and romantic. Joe
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 20, 2008 01:46:44 AM Report
Wow Steve, you've outdone yourself. I love this! =))

 

~Barbara~





 


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