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Author Name: PremiumCorin 11 Comments
Date Added: August 19, 2008 09:08:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Love Weeping

Today from far away I heard
Great Love weeping, weeping.
Beside her on the ground I saw
Misery keeping, keeping

All his darkest thoughts for her
While she was weeping, weeping.
And every word that Great Love spoke
In pain was steeping, steeping.

The only comfort I could bring
Was my own weeping, weeping,
But nothing stayed dark-shadowed death
From his slow creeping, creeping.

Now every day, from far away,
I still hear weeping, weeping,
For ever now I swear my heart
Great love is keeping, keeping.
Author's Notes:

For a friend


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on August 31, 2008 07:54:51 PM Report
Loved the unique rhyme scheme here, very effective.

Lovely read.

Pamela

Comment By: FreeSamuel E. Stone on August 27, 2008 08:10:30 PM Report
Cleverly done... enjoyed...

Sam

Comment By: FreeA.P. on August 26, 2008 11:46:28 PM Report
this reads as a great lyrical ballad...beautiful form and rhythm.
sometimes sadness comforts sadness...i like how you brought (with words) the idea of love and misery personified in this piece, on a level playing field...an interesting concept that stuck with me through reading this.

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 23, 2008 11:06:38 PM Report
A copassionate write, David...I found it enchanting, enchanting. len len
Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 21, 2008 07:14:00 AM Report
What a fine display of genuine caring and concern, love, for a friend. It isn't often we wind up with friends who are willing to lay out their own hearts for us to borrow while our own is in the repair shop. What a great deal of compassion this contained; how lucky you both are to have this friendship. How lucky we are, to feel it from words.
Beautiful.
b
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 20, 2008 01:44:22 AM Report
Fine penning David. I felt the anguish & tears all the way through.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on August 19, 2008 07:17:13 PM Report
Wow...absolutely fantastic, David...a true friends heart.

 

CeeCee

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 19, 2008 01:16:17 PM Report
David,
 Your loving heart for your friend is so beautiful written from your poetic heart ..
 In this world there is so much heartaches  and we all weep with suffering ...Such is life they say!!
 But with this poem you embrace  your friend through poetry...I see she loves it...
 Love Ya!
 She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCathy on August 19, 2008 11:36:28 AM Report
WOW this is truly precious so comforting and so beautifully written This is truly a gem excellent write one which I really enjoyed reading
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 19, 2008 10:33:13 AM Report
This is truly lovely. Perfectly worded and the repeating give a consoling and comforting ambiance to the poem.
Really a special poem
Adri x

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 19, 2008 10:05:44 AM Report
A lovely heart felt gesture David and one I will treasure.

 

 Alison x





 


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