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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 11 Comments
Date Added: August 08, 2008 00:08:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Last Lie
I lay on the ground and clutch the earth
 
Waves of penance crash down on me
 
Love has become an act of selfishness
 
What I want had become what I needed
 
The lies that slipped easily from my mouth
 
Painfully peirced the heart of someone true
 
Is there a sliver of light in my darkened soul
 
Please deliver the last drop of worth left in me
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on October 30, 2008 09:06:21 AM Report

This is a powerful piece indeed. I do love your pleade here.


Fletch


Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on August 12, 2008 01:43:18 AM Report
Wow. Very powerful, and sad...

 

~Shanna

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 9, 2008 04:54:36 PM Report
They say it's never too late for redemption.. :o)...This one runs deep, buddy...len
Comment By: FreeAngel on August 9, 2008 03:54:22 PM Report
A most wonderful write hun

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on August 9, 2008 01:09:03 AM Report
Beautiful, down to Earth write =o)
There is always light, just have to find your way through that darkened forest(soul)
Muy bien!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeCathy on August 8, 2008 09:33:38 AM Report
Such a deep and emotional poem one which I really enjoyed reading I loved it Excellent as always
..........Cathy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 8, 2008 09:27:25 AM Report
Feelings so well expressed... I alway slove to read your poetry...Oh, And thank you for so many kind comments on my poems... your such a dear man..
hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 8, 2008 06:58:33 AM Report
This is great. Intense and though provoking.
A great great job here.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeGee on August 8, 2008 06:14:07 AM Report
Steve....again and always...a great write from you...
Well Done!.

Hugs
Gee xx


Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 8, 2008 01:44:02 AM Report

Raw emotion penned with great craftmanship.
Spendid write.
Linda


Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 8, 2008 01:16:28 AM Report
This poem is light enough. Your regret is tangible here Steve. Well chosen phrases...very emotive piece!

 

~Barbara~





 


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