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Author Name: FreeFireHam 6 Comments
Date Added: August 06, 2008 23:08:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Cloaked

Cloaked

 

Cloaked and yet not hidden.

Are there sins not forgiven?

The question still remains.

And also do these chains.

 

Silence resounds within this cloud.

And the volume is deafeningly loud.

Withheld emotions can cause such pain.

Pain even more than gray skies and rain.

 

Share feelings with those you love most.

They’ll not judge, you keep them close.

Occasionally you may take down your guard.

No matter how much you have been scarred.

 

These loved ones care deeply for you.

Regardless of what you may say or do.

Rest my dear and take a deep breath.

We who love you will so until death.

 

Harold McLelland

08/06/08

Author's Notes:
Remember, there are those who accept you as you are.
And that is without acception and unconditionally!
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 7, 2008 10:10:33 PM Report
I enjoyed very much reading this well rhymed, touching, and meaningful poem.

Linda

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 7, 2008 06:58:34 PM Report
Just to know we have such awesome friends...makes life a little more understanding
The love of our friends becomes treasures to cherish
. Hugs ~ She Whispers

These loved ones care deeply for you.

Regardless of what you may say or do.


Rest my dear and take a deep breath.


We who love you will so until death.




Comment By: FreeCathy on August 7, 2008 09:41:49 AM Report
Ahhh this is so beautiful in every word  just pulling at the heart strings your a wonderful and sweet man... Excellent write and loved it
.........hugs Cathy

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 7, 2008 07:35:43 AM Report
You are such a nice guy Ham I said it many times...if I was ever to be carried out of a burning building I would like it to be by someone like you ;-)

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeGee on August 7, 2008 07:32:03 AM Report
This is wonderful piece from you Ham.
I enjoy reading this....

Gee xx

Comment By: FreeAngel on August 7, 2008 03:17:04 AM Report
This is beautiful. And those people who love you like this are your true friends and love ones

 

Love Angelxxx





 


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