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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 10 Comments
Date Added: July 31, 2008 16:07:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Son

 

What do you see
 
My yellow haired one
 
What do you believe
 
My blue eyed son
 
What’s your future
 
But a tale to be spun
 
How many times
 
Will my boy try
 
How many times
 
Will my boy cry
 
Take way his trouble
 
Remove his weight
 
Keep him humble
 

Bless his fate

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes:

I have two daughters, a granddaughter and grandson.  No son, but if I did this would be my prayer for him.  In case you're wondering, I pray for my adult daughters a lot !  :-)  I am sure the parents of the young men in combat (women are restricted) never imagined their future to be like this.  I pray for the parents and the brave men. 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 13, 2009 11:34:42 PM Report
Ya know what, buddy? You just described my blonde, blue-eyed son...A lovely prayer.....len
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 3, 2008 01:35:38 AM Report
You empathize and are thus inspired. A lovely prayer indeed. Bless you and yours Steve.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 1, 2008 03:00:55 AM Report
This is really beautiful. Endearing and honest. 
Outstanding Steve. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeGee on August 1, 2008 01:32:58 AM Report
Steve dear,

 

This is such a wonderful write...

I enjoy reading this...

 

Hugs,

Gee xxx

Comment By: FreeKeri on July 31, 2008 08:27:20 PM Report
I think anyone with a child (or assumed children, bless my drama daughters) understands this prayer.  Oddly enough, my "daughters" are as old as I am!

 

This was very well written.  :)

 

Always,

~Keri

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 31, 2008 06:34:55 PM Report
Steve,
I have four children.. Two boys  two girls I was blessed... now nine grand children... My son married a woman with three kids then had two of their own... Yes, I am blessed so much...
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on July 31, 2008 06:11:35 PM Report
Steve,
Wonderful write--I am blessed with the most wonderful son! Enjoyed this, thanks!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 31, 2008 05:39:00 PM Report
So loving so caring just loved this absolutely perfect prayer for your son
.........Cathy

Comment By: FreeAngel on July 31, 2008 04:40:40 PM Report
A lovely write Steve alway wanted a son and my daughter had a princess. Wouldent change it for the world though. Great write
Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on July 31, 2008 04:18:56 PM Report
Steve, nice writing. john




 


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