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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: July 27, 2008 17:07:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When the sunshine weeps

When the Sunshine weeps

 

Let my heart be still my love
In the peace of your embrace
Take my soul this crazy night
Or let me leave without a trace
 
White stallions racing past the moon
A black silk bed of diamonds
Thunder crashing in my head
The sound of roaring lions
 
On a golden chariot of desire
In a dream that cannot be
I ride with you till daybreak
When the night time sets me free
 
I can only escape
When the black widow sleeps
In the dark of the night
Or when the sunshine weeps

 

Author's Notes:
An old one thought i would put it on again.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on July 28, 2008 07:33:26 AM Report
Simply magnificent. Read it several times over John and it just kept getting better...

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 28, 2008 03:27:09 AM Report
I am so glad you post this again.  Beautiful as always.
I really love this poem.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeSteve on July 27, 2008 10:12:58 PM Report

You have captured the essence of romance her John.


Comment By: FreeJoe on July 27, 2008 09:31:40 PM Report
Nothing wrong with this old one, John. Joe 
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 27, 2008 07:51:26 PM Report
I can only escape

When the black widow sleeps

In the dark of the night

Or when the sunshine weeps

 Dear heart I have been the inbetween worlds myself... Glad you reposted it!! HUgs ~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on July 27, 2008 06:26:34 PM Report
Great piece,John
On a golden chariot of desire

In a dream that cannot be

I ride with you till daybreak

When the night time sets me free

Micky





 


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