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Author Name: FreeAtrophiedRibbons 8 Comments
Date Added: July 23, 2008 10:07:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Recluse.
The phone is ringing.

But I'm too busy doing nothing.

Just sitting all alone

indulging in my suffering.

There's a knock at the door

but I'm not home.

My heart's not here 

only my bones.

I can't see the path

because I'm blinded by fear

I don't dare ask

you to come around here.

I'm tired. You're broken

Together we're alone.

Sinking and silenced

in the water like a stone
Author's Notes:

It's all fun and games until somebody gets roundhouse kicked in the face.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on September 23, 2009 11:41:37 AM Report

 Your writing is amazing.


Comment By: PremiumEric Siedzikowski on August 17, 2009 11:06:42 AM Report
good poem
Comment By: FreeJami Renae on April 16, 2009 02:51:02 PM Report
I can really feel the emotion in this.
Your so great with words.


Comment By: FreeWide Awake on September 5, 2008 01:39:42 PM Report
Your poetry is very poignant....

I cannot imagine with what depth you will be writing in twenty years from now.
A brilliant expressionist and deepest of thinkers you are.

Unique poetry...very heartfelt, expressed...poignantly!

Pamela

Comment By: FreeRachel on August 29, 2008 06:18:59 PM Report
I love your writing, it has such a great rhyme and flow to it. I love this poem, especially the lines "There's a knock at the door but I'm not home.
My heart's not here, only my bones."


Comment By: FreeA.P. on July 29, 2008 01:41:39 AM Report
"together we're alone"...that is such a powerful line, especially followed by the next two lines...so many nuances of fragmentation, that even in togetherness their is a separateness...this was a compelling read, nicely done.

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 25, 2008 04:37:48 AM Report
This is simply excellent. Short lines well thought out so ably describe the hopelessness and futility of the depression we sometimes find ourselves in.

Hope you are feeling better now.

 

aunty x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 23, 2008 10:12:15 PM Report
Johnny... this says it all the heartbeat of your poem..
~ She Whispers

I'm tired. You're broken

Together we're alone.

Sinking and silenced

in the water like a stone






 


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