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Comment By:  Angel Wings on September 23, 2009 11:41:37 AM |
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Your writing is amazing.
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Comment By:  Eric Siedzikowski on August 17, 2009 11:06:42 AM |
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good poem
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| Comment By: Jami Renae on April 16, 2009 02:51:02 PM |
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I can really feel the emotion in this.
Your so great with words.
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| Comment By: Wide Awake on September 5, 2008 01:39:42 PM |
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Your poetry is very poignant....
I cannot imagine with what depth you will be writing in twenty years from now.
A brilliant expressionist and deepest of thinkers you are.
Unique poetry...very heartfelt, expressed...poignantly!
Pamela
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| Comment By: Rachel on August 29, 2008 06:18:59 PM |
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I love your writing, it has such a great rhyme and flow to it. I love this poem, especially the lines "There's a knock at the door but I'm not home.
My heart's not here, only my bones."
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| Comment By: A.P. on July 29, 2008 01:41:39 AM |
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"together we're alone"...that is such a powerful line, especially followed by the next two lines...so many nuances of fragmentation, that even in togetherness their is a separateness...this was a compelling read, nicely done.
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| Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on July 25, 2008 04:37:48 AM |
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This is simply excellent. Short lines well thought out so ably describe the hopelessness and futility of the depression we sometimes find ourselves in.
Hope you are feeling better now.
aunty x
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| Comment By: She Whispers on July 23, 2008 10:12:15 PM |
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Johnny... this says it all the heartbeat of your poem..
~ She Whispers
I'm tired. You're broken
Together we're alone.
Sinking and silenced
in the water like a stone
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