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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 11 Comments
Date Added: July 22, 2008 11:07:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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One Way Street

Love left me like an orphan sitting on the curb

 

The river of tears I cried flowed into the gutter

 

An insignificant stream of unwanted emotions

 

Facing a one way street of abandoned feelings

 

A journey abruptly halted at loves dead end

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 12, 2009 01:51:52 PM Report
Uggg--this is like a punch in the gut--feel this--man--being an orphan really sucks the big one!

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeMary on November 24, 2008 10:03:19 AM Report
now you got me thinking.....
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 26, 2008 06:47:04 PM Report
Would you like an ice cream cone, buddy?... :o)
Comment By: FreeAngel on July 26, 2008 12:27:45 PM Report
Tears in my eyes a lovely sad write Steve
Comment By: FreeDeAnna on July 23, 2008 10:38:55 PM Report
Alright Steve, you sure know how to set the waterworks rollin!  Great write hun, hugs, DeAnna
Comment By: FreeS on July 23, 2008 01:50:30 PM Report
nice analogy

Comment By: Freejohn carter on July 23, 2008 12:48:53 PM Report
Wow Steve. You sure ripped the shit out of me. Do you still want to play that game of ping pong lol?

                                                                     John

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 22, 2008 09:51:08 PM Report
You tear out a heart with this poetry.... So sad....
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 22, 2008 12:29:34 PM Report
Beautiful and so sad. Love can be so cruel. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeAmy on July 22, 2008 12:19:09 PM Report
Steve

That first line conjurs up such a sight. I like the metaphor throughout.

Enjoyed this piece.

hugs

~Amy

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 22, 2008 12:05:19 PM Report
ohh sounds like you need a hug I am sending you one I loved this sad yet touching poem Excellent display of emotions ......~big hug~~
..........hugs Cathy





 


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