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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 12 Comments
Date Added: July 21, 2008 10:07:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Thnk About You Baby

 

I think about you baby

Over and over again

Wondering how you been

 

I canít live without you now

And itís done me in

Because of my sin

 

Iím crying in the present

Living in the past

Thinking why didnít it last

 

I canít escape the regret

So Iím down on my knees

Begging you please

 

I need one more chance

Then you will see

What you mean to me

 

Iíll think about you baby

Over and over again

Please let me know when

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes:
It's just a poem but if I knew music maybe a song   :-)
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 26, 2010 10:11:10 AM Report
Wow, Steve! Amazingly heart-breaking!

This is really something that reached out and played the chords on my heart-strings.

my daughter listens to a song sometimes called "here without you, baby" or something like that...and every time I hear it I cry. This had the same effect.

WELL done!

Hugs....

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 31, 2009 02:56:38 PM Report
I think it would be a great poem very honest emotions....
 Hugs ~ She Whisper s

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 31, 2008 09:02:04 PM Report
Len knows music or can direct you to someone else who does. (maybe even someone on this site) You're onto something here Steve...this has the feel of a song alright, when I read it the song "Here Without You" kept playing in my head. Who knows why...maybe it was the like emotion of the two. Gud on yah mate! =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 26, 2008 06:50:13 PM Report
It read like the core of a song to me...
 

"I canít live without you now

And itís done me in


Because my sin"

 

Should that be, "because OF my sin?"

Comment By: FreeAngel on July 26, 2008 02:58:01 PM Report
Loved it Steve can hear the background music to it now a no 1 hit in my eyes.

 

Brilliant

Comment By: FreeGee on July 22, 2008 09:46:31 AM Report
If this is a song I may want to sing.
The rythm is already there...
waiting for the music....
Nice flow and this is beautiful piece from you as always.....

PS: Spelling error on your title : Thnk-Think

Comment By: Freejohn carter on July 22, 2008 07:53:02 AM Report
It does read like a song Steve. There is a flow which creates a rythm. The more times i read it music certainly seems to be in the back ground.

                                                         John

Comment By: Freenicholas on July 21, 2008 04:52:34 PM Report
so sad and i am going threw it right now

i understand how u feel

 

DHP.....

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on July 21, 2008 02:46:59 PM Report
You betcha! Wished I knew how to play music..
Good stuff Steve..
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 21, 2008 11:29:29 AM Report
This is nice, longing and flowing. 
I also think it will make a good song.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeButterflyDreams on July 21, 2008 11:09:05 AM Report
This is a very good poem. I bet that it would make a good song too.

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 21, 2008 10:28:58 AM Report
Just longing in your word accompanied by love.. Such a sweet pome here Steve hope she reads this she will love it
........hugs Cathy





 


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