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Author Name: Freerainbowchaser 6 Comments
Date Added: July 16, 2008 05:07:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sixteen@Heart
I run my fingers through the hairs on his chest.
He sleeps while I think of how I'm blessed.
In my head, I relive the first "I love you"
And the obligatory "I love you, too".
I may not have meant it but I soon would.
He proved worthy and for me too good.
I was made to stutter, stammer, and feel sixteen
Because he showed me affection like I'd never seen.
Freeze-framed at heart, sixteen I'll always be
But if he opens his eyes, an old woman he'll see.
I pray he'll be blind to my physical flaws
And as we age, still jump me - all paws.
He's sixteen at heart too and I must confess;
You'd never know it by the gray hairs on his chest.
Author's Notes:
aging love
:o)
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Comment By: Freeaspiring sage on June 12, 2009 10:44:39 AM Report
absolutely love this. i would maybe work on this a bit -- for me it doesn't scan well but the ideas are great. a great write thank you
In my head, I relive the first "I love you"

And the obligatory "I love you, too".

I may not have meant it but I soon would.

He proved worthy and for me too good. 




Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 12, 2009 02:26:34 AM Report
I have to comment on this for two Amy. My daughter adores this poem and last night she read it for me and we were both moved to tears. I don't know how I missed it but it is loaded with love and deep feeling. It really is one the most beautiful poems and expressions of love I have read. A real treasure..very, very well done.

 

Ali x into favs

Comment By: FreeJessie Lee on July 25, 2008 10:32:43 PM Report
This is lovely, also brought a little tear to my eye.  I love what I have read of your poetry and will definitley be looking out for more! xxx
Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on July 17, 2008 06:29:29 PM Report
Ah Amy, but:-

 

But love is blind and lovers cannot see
The pretty follies that themselves commit;
For if they could, Cupid himself would blush.

 

Trust in his blindness and enjoy yours - it is not how it looks that matters but how it feels!

 

From another purblind lover!

 

love

 

David

Comment By: FreeSteve on July 16, 2008 08:58:38 PM Report
 Romance like fine wine,  should get better with age.
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 16, 2008 06:05:28 AM Report
For some reason love brings out the youth in us it makes us feel so giddy at times like we did when we were younger...gotta love it...Excellent and perfect!! I loved this..
........hugs Cathy





 


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