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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 4 Comments
Date Added: July 12, 2008 12:07:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
Mortal Weakness
The concern troubles of my heart are enlarged
my mind afflicted with ashamed grief
forgive my mortal weakness

Redeem me with your loyal presence
I need to trust you with my existing troubles

Examine my fearful unsettled mind
listening in truth of your words

Strength of my heart feels like melted wax
 my whispers cleaveth to my dying jaws
loss of your adoring love
dust now on my lips

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Comment By: Freetom on July 13, 2008 01:24:51 AM Report
beautiful penning India

hugs kisses


Comment By: FreeJerry on July 12, 2008 10:03:00 PM Report
you lay yourself so bare in this right, open and needing.. honesty a very good read.
Comment By: FreeAngel on July 12, 2008 02:46:49 PM Report
A wonderful poem She


Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 12, 2008 12:22:26 PM Report
You have done it once more Bravo my dear friend words that just whisper to my heart loved it


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