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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 14 Comments
Date Added: July 10, 2008 15:07:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Twilight
As my life enters autumn I begin to see
The shadows of what used to be
The winds of change have started to blow
As to my destiny I must go
Like a moth drawn to a shining light
I can't resist the calling of the night
When it was dawn I was so reckless
Now evening approaches I feel so helpless
What was the future has become the past
Its such a pity the morning did not last
Such a shame youth not properly served
Never given the attention that it's deserved
When the days dwindle to a precious few
I hope to look back and admire the view
And as I travel towards the setting sun
I can accept with grace, the day is done


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on February 8, 2011 01:55:13 PM Report


Excellent write Henry!



Well deserving of an award for poetic excellence



Pamela

Comment By: FreeAmy on March 29, 2009 10:26:52 PM Report
Congrats to you, Henry on the Feature. Well done.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on March 26, 2009 10:55:30 AM Report
Wonderful work Henry! Congrats on the featured award. Certainly full of truth for us all.

~Hugs Cindy

Comment By: FreeSteve on March 25, 2009 07:23:04 PM Report
Congratulations !
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on March 24, 2009 11:18:20 AM Report
I'm so glad to see the award on this one. Well done. Congratulations. ML
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 24, 2009 06:45:24 AM Report
Congrats on this Henry, it is very worthy of the award my man! Joe
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 23, 2009 08:17:46 PM Report
Henry:   congratulations for this Feature Poem Award.   Keep up the great writes.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeMichelle on March 23, 2009 07:33:20 PM Report
I think everyone can relate to this poem, well done. It was a very enjoyable read, and thanks for sharing it with us.

 

~*Michelle*~

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on July 14, 2008 09:05:30 PM Report
Henry, this deserves an award for sure!!! This is absolutely beautiful!

Creative with a soft touch I would say. You have certainly outdone

yourself here. I shall keep this one......something to look back on as a reminder

of what is to come or what has already passed....this is just amazing!!

Always wondering and pondering....dealing with the facts of'

what if's and "what I should have done's"....just brilliant!

Hugs,

Penny

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on July 14, 2008 08:31:39 PM Report
This is beautiful. I love it. ML
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 11, 2008 12:17:09 PM Report
Henry,
 For once I am lost for words to express my honest emotions reading this very truthful poem about ones life... Have you beem peeking inside my heart as well??
This poem is how I feel now so much of my life wasted... Now what do I do...with whats left of it??
 Who and what do I turn to now???
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGlata on July 11, 2008 05:59:46 AM Report
It's a beautiful repost, Henry...and tweaks or not, it's a beautiful  piece of work! Sad reflecting back on what we've let get by without appreciating it, huh?  Been there!!!

Great job on this....

Big hugs and understanding!

Glata

Comment By: Freeb doneff on July 11, 2008 05:13:45 AM Report
Tweak away Henry, it is still stunning. Reflection something that is hard to do at times, but, it happens as we get older. We always wonder about the what ifs...and I hate that.
This was lovely Henry; I hope your twilight days, give you much to smile about.
B

Comment By: FreeAngel on July 11, 2008 04:06:57 AM Report
Fabulous Henry chicken. Hope all is well with you my friend.

 

Love Angelxx





 


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