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Author Name: Freezeldaesmeralda 2 Comments
Date Added: July 08, 2008 13:07:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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thunder
i layed in my bed and
listened to thunder,
soft and distant,
with my window propped open-
held by an empty bottle
of whiskey
Where i sank to is a mystery;
a series of dosings and
wakings and
forgotten smidgens of dreams
in between
Seems as though the day was
wasted in this manner
though i often wonder what
truly constitutes a
wasted day
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on July 9, 2008 10:34:53 AM Report
This is good for many reasons.  Very original with mountains of honesty.  It is real and raw yet subtle and insightful.   Definatelly a new favorite of mine.
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 8, 2008 03:02:28 PM Report
Good question.  I supose it depends on the person themselves I enjoyed my read Excellent poem
........Cathy





 


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