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Author Name: Freejohncarter 7 Comments
Date Added: July 05, 2008 08:07:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I wake with her
Tormenting me
Her rainbow takes away the grey
No heaven could hold her beauty
In every cloud I see her face
When ever the rain comes
She is there
Nothing will deny me
The touch or feel
Of her rain on my face
Or the morning
When I say hello.
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Comment By: Freejess on July 30, 2008 02:44:17 PM Report
beautiful poem john.....
Comment By: FreeSteve on July 8, 2008 08:03:55 AM Report

This is a very enjoyable read.  Soft, romantic and great imagery John.

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 7, 2008 07:43:38 AM Report
This is really pretty. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 5, 2008 11:27:39 AM Report
She is both your pleasure and your torment...from the heavens yet not contained. The morning awaits when a rainbow sky will be yours and hers to share. Loved the ending. *sigh* This reminds me of the Tim McGraw song, "She's My Kind of Rain" that song. Good stuff John, sure to stir her heart! =))



Comment By: FreeAngel on July 5, 2008 10:09:38 AM Report
A lovely write John


Love Angelxxx

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 5, 2008 09:09:57 AM Report
In your loving romantic heart it was always about only...her . Your love is as mysterious as the whispering winds of passion... Your lady will love this poetic poem just for ..her.
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 5, 2008 08:17:21 AM Report
This has romance and love all through it your words so softly whisper your love Excellent and very beautiful write


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