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Author Name: FreeAtrophiedRibbons 6 Comments
Date Added: July 03, 2008 20:07:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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Witnessed in a Hotel Room.
Let the games begin, just skin on skin
The open window letting the traffic in
And the air is cold, but it doesn't matter
Because this will all just be a memory after..

The passion of the action
Author's Notes:
A poem. About lesbians.

We don't give to get back in.
Call it love, call it lust, or even sin.
Whether love gave way to lust
Or sin gave way to us, call it whim


with arms
and 
sweat
and 
tangled breath

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on December 17, 2009 01:08:54 AM Report
Very Good!

Damon
Comment By: PremiumEric Siedzikowski on August 17, 2009 10:58:41 AM Report
good poem
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on September 6, 2008 05:27:06 PM Report
This embodies perfectly the words of the actions...very succinct and effective.

Pamela

Comment By: FreeS on July 15, 2008 07:02:10 PM Report
nice

funny how everyone gets it just by the title

Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on July 13, 2008 10:25:23 PM Report
The precise poem narrates the long love story, full of passion and romance. You have portrayed the whole scene in a highly dexterous and comprehensive way!!!
Comment By: FreeA.P. on July 4, 2008 07:53:47 PM Report
love this, so much...every line emphasizes many unwritten lines screaming between...it's as if you set a tone with the atmosphere of the situation (which i am assuming is a meaningless hook-up in a hotel room), letting the cool air, the business of the street, etc make up the events of this moment of contact...as if there is no emotion...
i may be reading for too much into this but that is why i love poetry. and i really enjoyed this piece.





 


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