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Date Added: June 30, 2008 10:06:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My Perfect Woman
She is a woman whose uniqueness will emanate
a magnetism. Mentally lustful for life and knowledge,
physically passionate, spiritually whole and
centered, she will understand gentleness is strength.
She will have laughter and truth woven through each day.
She will possess an energy that will not accept the
"what is" of circumstances...if she doesn't like it she
will change it. She builds with concrete of what is real;
no games, no drugs, no untruths. She understands
mental chemistry is just as important as physical and
will not settle for less. She will be insane and brilliant,
but not perfect... because I am not. Age and appearance
does not matter but there must be a part of her that never
graduated from childhood.
This is my perfect woman.
Author's Notes:
Dream on old man,
dream on.
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Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on October 22, 2008 08:46:43 AM Report
Interesting composite, I especially like the fact that "age and appearance" are irrelevant, I have found that the great beauty in a woman comes from within, not without.

 

 

 

---Poetrydad---

Comment By: FreeReborn on July 7, 2008 06:26:16 PM Report
A dream is but reality not yet reached, my goold old man!! To dream is not a sin, so keep dreaming in a good way, and do keep writing!!!!

 

*~Reborn~*

Comment By: FreeAngel on July 7, 2008 01:36:17 PM Report
Fabulous. No one is perfect but this write was my friend
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 7, 2008 06:15:56 AM Report
Awww shucks, SP! You're modeling your perfect woman right after me!!! LMAO just kidding! I'm a basket case...but I vow to never grow up ;o)

I think that if you find a woman with half these qualities you're doing  great...I am sure that to have your love and devotion she'd develop the other qualities...

Hugs and happy hunting!

Sunshine

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 2, 2008 02:52:37 AM Report
Wow, what a list.  Beautifully penned.  We all look for that ONE... 
I like this Richard, great job. 
Adri X

PS:  If you find her, ask if she has a brother maybe...  ;o)

Comment By: FreeS on July 1, 2008 06:00:08 PM Report
oh wait sorry,

i missed the part about age and appearance not mattering

haha
great poem my friend

Comment By: FreeS on July 1, 2008 05:59:21 PM Report
um ok
when you find this woman let me know


chances are i wont be hearing from you anytime soon

Comment By: FreeAmy on July 1, 2008 05:34:51 PM Report
She is out there and she'll be dang lucky to have you too.

I assume the others meant a 'difficult task' because of the truth with which this was written. You laid your heart out there. I admire that.

hugs

~Amy

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on June 30, 2008 03:58:33 PM Report
Well this is great!!!! Many women could and would become all of these

above just to be your gal Richard. Great qualities you seek......we do have

women like this here in the South......Awwwww shucks.....a woman would

ever be so blessed to fill these qualifications just to be with such a wonderful

man. This is just fantastic!!

Hugs~XOXO

~Penny~

Comment By: Freenoah count on June 30, 2008 02:13:16 PM Report

I agree with Steve, a very difficult task.  Well done!! 


Comment By: FreeSteve on June 30, 2008 12:29:35 PM Report
That was a difficult and somewhat dangerous task you took on Richard.  Good job.......knowing what works for you is important.....finding it might be harder.
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 30, 2008 11:52:34 AM Report
Such a wonderful description of the perfect woman for you yes I agree mental chemistry is soooo very important can not just be physical for sure. have to know the person inside. and them that person kindsa like a blind woman loving a man then regaining her sight she will still love them Excellent just perfect your a man who knows what he wants no go for it
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on June 30, 2008 11:30:01 AM Report
It sounds like "authenticity" is what your looking for...someone who knows who they are. "Mental chemistry" is important to anyone of character. It is nice to hear that there are men out there that want more than just outer beauty.
Helen

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 30, 2008 11:22:21 AM Report
What a fabulous description....you do know exactly what you want and I believe it is the perfect make up for a man as well. I especially enjoyed "mental chemistry is just as important as physical". Very specific and well rounded out Richard...it is refreshing to read something far removed from a list of physical attributes alone. *cheers*

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on June 30, 2008 10:16:12 AM Report
Well, gosh, Richard. What seems to be the problem? You've just described us. If you'd just learn to appreciate us, any one of us could fill that bill. It's always in the eye of the beholder, old friend. What you see is what you get. ML
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 30, 2008 10:08:23 AM Report
Richard...
Sounds like a man of wisdom to me... In this life we learn real fast what we don't want......
Never stop dreaming it keeps us a live...
Sounds like the perfect woman to me for you my dear friend...A very heart felt poem...
Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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