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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 9 Comments
Date Added: June 28, 2008 00:06:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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We Suffocate

Life may suffocate us sometimes

 We need a peaceful place a floral garden
with natures sweet perfume

 Or a summer meadow of sweet grasses
with wild flowers all in bloom

Perhaps a quiet beach at twilight
with soft hues sunset plays
on the surging waves

Even a stroll down a country road
with Autumn leaves all a flame  

Amid this astonishing beauty
there is room for your restless soul
to expand

Where you can breath again
rest your mind of daily thoughts
that scramble for some
relaxing happiness
 

Sitting outside with a summer breeze evening
just listen and behold captivating moments
and drink it all in like a fine wine
 

 Our tired heart begins to quiet
 peace begins to come into

our restless soul

The soothing spirit of nature embrace
releases our captive prisoner heart
and tired mind




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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRohit Sapra on June 29, 2008 05:18:59 PM Report

Mind, feelings and soul are all ingredients of a being which are precious in the formation so when these three essentialities in a being are tired then obviously a being tends to be non- existent. Lovely poem which is truly unique.


Comment By: FreeAngel on June 29, 2008 11:19:47 AM Report
Emotions deep and heartfelt hun. Wonderful
Comment By: FreeTia Bayer on June 28, 2008 10:07:09 PM Report
A nice way of reminding us to sometimes just stop and take a deep breath, and realize that there is some potential to what may, at times, seem like a dying world.

<3 Tia

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on June 28, 2008 03:58:05 PM Report
Well, you have done it with this one dear lady.

You tell it like it is and how I feel.

Wonderful poem.

Hugs,

Richard

Comment By: FreeHarold Ham McLelland on June 28, 2008 12:41:31 PM Report
Yes my friend we all need a place to escape all the hustle and bustle of this high speed life...  I personally love the evening at and after sunset...  Seems the world slows down and cools down just a bit...  Sounds of humans fade leaving only the sounds of song birds crickets and frogs to entertain us...  BRAVO Scarlett!!!
Comment By: FreeSteve on June 28, 2008 10:01:39 AM Report
An excellent write Scarlett.  You have beautifully described an oasis of calm and serenity.
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 28, 2008 07:30:57 AM Report
Where no one accuses and no one Judges
Nature loves  holds no grudg

Wow once again  this amazing poem going into my favorates, Loved it just brought such peace into my heart I think I really need to run away to be with nature Excellent
perfect in every word
.........hugs .......Cathy

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on June 28, 2008 02:59:51 AM Report
This is so very true and good advice to take, far to often we let life take us over instead of it being the other way around, wonderfully written Scarlett~Graham.
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 28, 2008 12:18:22 AM Report
I loved this for the serene feeling it gave me when I imagined all these calming scenes. Sighssss

I feel better already! Thank you Scarlett for this moment of beauty.

~Cindy xo

 





 


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