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Author Name: FreeNewKing 1 Comments
Date Added: June 22, 2008 13:06:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Perspective

Like a car crashing into a wall

My life slammed into perspective

I know now what Iím supposed to do

Sadly itís got nothing to do with you

 

As my world crashed and rebuild

I stood witness

Which isnít easy to do,

When youíre scared witless

 

Do you understand why Iím unsure?

Itís frightening to see things so clear

Everything you hope for

And everything you fear

 

My path is set

My goal is clear

Clean my head for nonsense

And my heart for regrets

 

Though I've cherished every moment

Thereís something Iíve realised

My life will only truly be mine

the day we say goodbye

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJennifer on December 1, 2008 10:03:54 PM Report
GREAT OPENING LINES!

 

 

 

Like a car crashing into a wall

My life slammed into perspective

 

 

 

I really felt this and it was a very impactful ending as well!


Jennifer 

 

 





 


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